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Young people drink during weekends because they think it is going to spend more as they become more sociable, have no shame (but the abuse is because otherwise may end up in a coma or even dead). Also because most want to appear to be higher, like the others, be cool, and so on. Most people, in my opinion, begins to smoke or drink on a social issue, there is the idea that if babies are "cool". On many occasions I have listened to my friends say that if you do not drink do not go well. Parents have an important role because they are the model for their children, but I think even more important is that of friends. In most cases, if all your friends smoke or drink your finish smoking and drinking (especially in younger children after which fortunately is something many of them trial and the left). Must have a lot of personality to say no when everyone around you is doing what. As for the botellón sale is done because a lot cheaper than if you get drunk in a pub or a nightclub.
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Young people drink during weekend because they think that is going to spend more as they become more sociable, they aren't shame (but the abuse is because otherwise may end up in coma or even dead). Also because most want to appear to be stronger, like the others, be cool, and so on. Most people, in my opinion, begins to smoke or drink on a social issue, there is the idea that if babies are "cool". On many occasions I have listened to my friends say that if you do not drink do not go well. Parents have an important role because they are the model for their sons, but I think even more important is about their friendships. In most of cases, if all your friends smoke or drink your finish smoking and drinking (specially in younger children after which fortunately is something many of them trial and the left). Must have a lot of personality to say "no" when everyone around you is doing what. As for the botellón sale is done because a lot cheaper than if you get drunk in a pub or a nightclub.
Gracias por las anteriores calificaciones, disculpa la demora, pero he estado bastante atareado.

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