Quiero corrección ortográfica del siguiente texto en inglés
Si pudiera ser me gustaria que me corrigieras las faltas que tengo en esta redaccion lo mas antes posibles. Muchas gracias. "" The day I will never forget is when a cloudy day was walking in the forest and found a cave, enter in her and when I took a few meters inside a few bats went out. While enter in the cave, been more reduces and more humid. When I was going approximately ten minutes walking listen to a roar of an animal, and by the time focuses the ligther towards the fund I saw as come me a wild boar running then I began to running towards the exit. While I running listen to a voice that come from the entry and I shouts that persue a wild boar, and out I saw that the voice come from the guard of the forest that when the wild boar went out he shoot a tranquilizing dart. After it I not to entering a cave. ""
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" The day I will never forget is when in a cloudy day I was walking in the forest and found a cave, I entered in and when I had walk a few meters inside a few bats came out. As I entered deeper in the cave, it became more reduced and more damp. When I had walk approximately ten minutes, I listened a roar of an animal, and by the time I focused the flahligth toward the sound I saw a wild boar running in my direction, then I began to run looking for the exit. While I was running I heard a voice that came from the entrance and I shouted I was being persued by a wild boar, and when I finally were out I saw that the voice came from the guard of the forest, and when the wild boar went out he shooted a tranquilizing dart. After that it I will not to enter a cave again. ""
